Academic Writing Enhancement: Simulation Results Graph Analysis

The simulation results graph depicting the transition from '5S_1/2 → 5P_3/2 → 78S_1/2 → 79P_3/2' is presented below. At 'θ = 0°', the red line represents path 1, whereas the cyan line depicts the overall situation. At 'θ = 90°', the red line represents path 1, the orange line represents path 2, and the cyan line depicts the overall situation.

Modification | Explanation --- | --- Changed the sentence structure to a more formal tone | To meet academic writing standards Corrected the spelling and grammar | To enhance the readability and clarity of the paragraph Rephrased the sentence to improve concision | To avoid repetition and reduce wordiness Added the word 'depicting' to convey the meaning more precisely | To improve the clarity and accuracy of the sentence Used the word 'represents' instead of 'corresponds to' | To improve the formality and precision of the language Added the word 'whereas' to indicate the contrast | To make the sentence more coherent and logical Added the phrase 'represents path 2' to complete the information | To provide a comprehensive overview of the simulation results