逻辑清晰的科研经历描述:从磁性生物炭到微生物电化学
逻辑问题:
- 第一句话中提到的磁性生物炭的研究经历与后面提到的科学研究的精确性和乐趣之间的联系不明确。
- 第二句话中提到的选择攻读硕士学位的原因与第一句话中提到的研究经历之间的关系不清楚。
- 第三句话中提到的硕士研究领域与第二句话中提到的研究目标之间的联系不明确。
- 第四句话中提到的咨询相关文献的过程与之后提到的微生物代谢研究之间的关系不清楚。
- 第五句话中提到的微生物电化学与之前提到的微生物代谢研究之间的联系不明确。
- 第六句话中提到的对微生物电化学的着迷与之前提到的未来研究方向之间的关系不清楚。
- 第七句话中提到的决定攻读博士学位的原因与第六句话中提到的着迷微生物电化学之间的联系不明确。
修改后的句子: My research experience in magnetic biochar during my undergraduate showed me the preciseness and pleasure of scientific research, which piqued my initial interest. As a result, I chose to pursue a master's degree after graduating from college. During my master's program, I focused on biological wastewater treatment and one of my research objectives was to investigate the metabolism of microbes in wastewater treatment. In the process of consulting relevant literature on microbial metabolism, I discovered that some studies utilized microbial electrochemistry, specifically microbial extracellular electron transfer, to explore the intricate details of microbial metabolism. This newfound knowledge fascinated me and sparked my interest in conducting future research in the field of microbial electrochemistry. As a result, I made the decision to pursue a PhD degree in this direction.
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