逻辑错误分析：微生物电化学与废水处理研究申请书

{'title':'逻辑错误分析：微生物电化学与废水处理研究申请书','description':'分析一篇关于微生物电化学与废水处理研究申请书的逻辑问题，并提出修改建议。','keywords':'微生物电化学, 废水处理, 博士申请, 逻辑错误','content':'这段话中存在逻辑问题。问题在于，作者提到自己对生物废水处理的研究产生了浓厚的兴趣，并对微生物的电化学新陈代谢和废水处理过程中的微生物细胞外电子转移感到着迷。然后，作者提到希望进入科研机构进行更严格的科学训练和获得博士学位。然而，作者并没有说明自己希望在博士研究中继续研究微生物电化学或废水处理。因此，逻辑不连贯。\n\n修改建议：\nThree years of study on biological wastewater treatment during my master’s study fully intrigued my curiosity about the marvellous microbial world. After reading some articles about microbial electrochemistry, I was fascinated by the interesting microbial electrochemistry metabolism, more specifically, microbial extracellular electron transfer in the wastewater treatment process. I hope to continue my research in this field and contribute to the advancements in microbial electrochemistry and wastewater treatment. Therefore, I apply for a PhD position, hoping to conduct research on an excellent platform like KAUST and further explore this field.'}'}