Improving the Readability of Academic Papers: A Case Study

{ "Original Sentence": "This conclusion can also be observed from Fig. 11, the dimensionless energy curve of power law model and Wouterse model.", "Edited Sentence": "This conclusion can also be observed from Fig. 11, which shows the dimensionless energy curves of the power law model and the Wouterse model.", "Explanation": "The original sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. By specifying that Fig. 11 shows the dimensionless energy curves and mentioning the models being compared, the sentence becomes more clear." }, { "Original Sentence": "The amplitude of the two curves are approximately the same.", "Edited Sentence": "The amplitudes of the two curves are approximately equal.", "Explanation": "The subject "amplitude" should be singular to agree with the verb "are". Replacing "same" with "equal" improves clarity." }