Academic Paper Writing: Polishing a Paragraph on SCG2 and BRCA Prognosis

""Analysis of SCG2 in the BRCA and normal tissues revealed that SCG2 was significantly up-regulated in TCGA database."" was modified to ""SCG2 was found to be significantly up-regulated in the BRCA and normal tissues according to the TCGA database analysis."". ""The influence of SCG2 mRNA expression level on the survival of BRCA patients was analyzed using TCGA data."" was modified to ""TCGA data was used to analyze the impact of SCG2 mRNA expression level on the survival of BRCA patients."". ""The survival of BRCA patients with high SCG2 expression was significantly shorter (Fig 3H, p=\0.043)."" was modified to ""BRCA patients with high SCG2 expression exhibited significantly shorter survival (Fig 3H, p=\0.043)."". ""These results indicated that SCG2 functioned as an oncogene in BRCA, and its high expression level portend worse prognosis."" was modified to ""These results suggest that SCG2 acts as an oncogene in BRCA, and its high expression level indicates a worse prognosis."".