作文语法修改建议：关于毛泽东的英雄事迹

{"title": "请问下面的作文有没有语法问题，如果有，请告诉我如何修改：\nThe hero in my eyes is Mao Zedong.\nMao Zedong was born in Hunan. He is handsome. And he has a round face, deep-set eyes, and a mole on his face. He is well-built and has really black hair. He is of medium height.\nMao Zedong studied at the Hunan First Normal School. Besides, he also worked as a teacher at the school. He made friends with many great people there. And it helped him a lot.\nMao Zedong is a considerate person. He is always ready to help other. So many people love him. Moreover, he is a brave person. Because he is ready to die for his country.\nMao Zedong found many people need help. So he led the Chinese Communist Party to make Chinese live well and get home. Also, he found the China. Many Chinese got jobs, went to the school, had foods and so on.\nMao Zedong is a great person and he is my hero. As a teenager of the country, we need study hard and learn well. And do something useful to our country. China will be better ans better.\n请把修改的方法做成表格内容：作文中有以下几处语法问题需要修改：\n\n1. "And he has a round face, deep-set eyes, and a mole on his face." 这句话中重复使用了"face"，可以改为 "And he has a round face, deep-set eyes, and a mole on his cheek."\n\n2. "And it helped him a lot." 这句话需要加上主语，可以改为 "And this experience helped him a lot."\n\n3. "He is always ready to help other." 这句话需要改为 "He is always ready to help others."\n\n4. "Because he is ready to die for his country." 这句话需要改为 "Because he was willing to die for his country."\n\n5. "Mao Zedong found many people need help." 这句话需要改为 "Mao Zedong saw that many people needed help."\n\n6. "So he led the Chinese Communist Party to make Chinese live well and get home." 这句话的表达不够清晰，可以改为 "So he led the Chinese Communist Party to improve the living conditions of the Chinese people and provide them with shelter."\n\n7. "China will be better ans better." 这句话中的 "ans" 应该改为 "and"，并且 "better" 应该改为 "better and better."\n\n以下是修改后的作文：\n\nThe hero in my eyes is Mao Zedong.\nMao Zedong was born in Hunan. He is handsome. And he has a round face, deep-set eyes, and a mole on his cheek. He is well-built and has really black hair. He is of medium height.\nMao Zedong studied at the Hunan First Normal School. Besides, he also worked as a teacher there. This experience helped him a lot and he made friends with many great people.\nMao Zedong is a considerate person. He is always ready to help others. So many people love him. Moreover, he was a brave person because he was willing to die for his country.\nMao Zedong saw that many people needed help. So he led the Chinese Communist Party to improve the living conditions of the Chinese people and provide them with shelter. Also, he established schools, created job opportunities, and ensured food supply for many Chinese.\nMao Zedong is a great person and he is my hero. As teenagers of the country, we need to study hard and learn well, and do something useful for our country. China will be better and better.\n