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Work Experience

• June-August 2022: Jupiter Lee & Co. Certified Public Accountants (Practising)
  • Audit clerk
  • Handled paperwork for accounting and auditing
  • Archived data and entered records

Activities Experience

• 2022-23: ACCA -2022-2023 BUSINESS COMPETITION

  • Took the role of team leader
  • Wrote a business project for the competition

• HKICPA Business Case Competition

  • Took the role of team leader
  • Wrote a business project for the competition

• 04 December-18 December 2021: Mission StarGate

  • Provided the task of maintaining order in the venue
  • Assisted students to participate more smoothly

• 2020-21: Mandarin Voice Contest 2020-Comedy Dubbing

  • Used fluent Mandarin skills
  • Dubbed the set situation in Mandarin

• 22 to 24 December 2018: PINE CARE (TAK FUNG) ELDERLY CENTRE

  • Worked as a trainee social worker
  • Designed games and activities for the elderly
  • Broadcasted weather conditions and menus for the elderly centre
  • Assisted the elderly