FTIR Analysis Confirms Successful Preparation of PAM-C8 to PAM-C22

| Original | Improved | Modification Explanation | |--------------------------------------------------------------------|-----------------------------------------------------------------|------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| | In conjunction with FTIR analysis, these findings substantiate the successful preparation of PAM-C8, PAM-C12, PAM-C18, and PAM-C22. | The successful preparation of PAM-C8, PAM-C12, PAM-C18, and PAM-C22 is confirmed by the results obtained from the FTIR analysis. | 1. Restructured the sentence: The improved version places emphasis on the successful preparation, making it the subject of the sentence. This improves clarity and readability. 2. Replaced 'these findings substantiate' with 'confirmed': This change uses more concise and precise language, aligning with the academic writing style. 3. Clarified the source of confirmation: The phrase 'results obtained from the FTIR analysis' clearly states the basis for confirming successful preparation. |