Proofread Paragraph for British English: Innovative Design and Technology Course

The Innovative Design and Technology course provided by the Faculty of Engineering not only fits in well with my undergraduate studies, but also complements the knowledge I need. Having developed a high degree of self-motivation and curiosity, as well as problem-solving skills during my past studies, I believe I am more than capable of studying this course. The course will allow me to gain more professional knowledge and practical skills for developing new solutions, services or products, and broaden my interdisciplinary perspectives. In particular, I hope to become an executive in the logistics and manufacturing sector to contribute innovative technology and new equipment to the development of the logistics industries. I am certain that the distinguished academic and practical environment at HKU will have a significantly positive impact on my prospects.

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• 'self-drive' changed to 'self-motivation'
• 'programme' changed to 'course'
• 'novel' changed to 'new'
• 'executive' changed to 'an executive'
• 'logistics industries' changed to 'logistics industries' (no change needed)
• 'HKU' changed to 'the distinguished academic and practical environment at HKU'