Improve Paragraph Clarity by Adding Sentences: A Guide with Examples

Sentence to add: However, it is important to note that this increase in passenger travel has also led to a significant increase in carbon emissions.

1. There is a clear potential for the greater use of the bicycle as an alternative means of personal transport to the car, particularly for short journeys. (2) Sixty per cent of all car journeys are less than eight kilometres, a distance well within the capabilities of the average cyclist. (3) Special lanes could be added to existing roads and new cycleways built. (4) Cyclists could be given priority of movement at road junctions. (5) Bicycle storage facilities would need to be built at workplaces and shopping areas. (6) These suggestions would help to promote the bicycle as a viable alternative to the car for short distances.

2. The choice made by individuals of which car to buy can have a significant effect on air pollution. (2) Some people may choose to buy a large car, either because it seems to offer a greater degree of protection in case of accident than a smaller one, or simply because they have a large family. (3) Some may decide on a powerful car because they enjoy the thrill of fast acceleration and a high top speed. (4) Large and powerful cars, with their relatively high fuel consumption, inevitably cause more air pollution than smaller alternatives. (5) In contrast, other individuals may choose a smaller, less powerful car for reasons of economy or environmental awareness.

3. Over the last fifty years, the total amount of passenger travel as measured in passenger kilometres has increased more than threefold. (2) Fifty years ago, the number of passenger kilometres travelled by bus and coach was about 45 per cent greater than that accounted for by car travel and twice as high as the figure for rail transport. (3) Now, however, cars account for approximately seven times the number of passenger kilometres travelled by trains and buses together. 'However, it is important to note that this increase in passenger travel has also led to a significant increase in carbon emissions.'