Financial Shared Service Model Optimization: Analysis of Grammar and Information Integration in Electric Power Enterprises

[1501098283]: 'Therefore, inordertobetterapplythefinancialsharedservicemodeltotheproductionandoperationofelectricpowerenterprises,theentiresystemoffinancialinformationmustbecontinuouslyoptimizedandimproved.' This sentence has no grammatical errors.

[1501098283]: 'inaddition,aperfectfinancialinformationsystemcanalsotransformtheenterprise'sbusinessdataintofinancialdataandefficientlyimprovethequalityoftheenterprise'sfinancialdataprocessing.' This sentence has no grammatical errors.

[1501098283]: 'Underthenewsituationoftheincreasinglyglobalizedeconomy,thedatasharingamongthevariousdepartmentsofthegroupenterprisessuchaselectricpowerenterprisesisstillfarfromenough,especiallyintheaspectofinformationcommunication,whichisnotperfect.' This sentence has no grammatical errors.

[1501098283]: 'Allthesemaketheirinformationintegrationlow,andtheinformationintegrationneedstobefurtherimproved.Theseproblemsstillexistintheintegrationofrealinformationsystems,asaresult,theactualoperationandimplementationeffectofthefinancialsharingmodelofthewholeenterprisehavebeengreatlyreduced.' This sentence has no grammatical errors.