英文语法检查：金融信息系统优化

句子 1: 'Therefore, inorder to better apply the financial shared service model to the production and operation of electric power enterprises, the entire system of financial information must be continuously optimized and improved.' 这句话没有语法错误。

句子 2: 'In addition, a perfect financial information system can also transform the enterprise's business data into financial data and efficiently improve the quality of the enterprise's financial data processing.' 这句话没有语法错误。