高中英语作文评分：邀请外教做访谈节目

Dear Caroline, I am Li Hua, head of 'Talk and Talk', an English program from the Campus Broadcasting Station, and I am writing to invite you as an interviewee about English study. I would like to introduce this program to you. Aiming to promote the relationship between teachers and students, it has enjoyed popularity in campus, owing to its casual and easy style. Every interviewed teacher will talk freely to share anything interesting with us. Through this interview, a better relationship is built up and we gain a lot. If it is convenient for you next Monday, I expect to have a wonderful talk with you from 5 p.m. to 6 p.m. The topic is proper ways to improve our English learning. We would be grateful for your presence and get your appropriate instruction before long.

评分：13分

评语：这篇作文整体上写得不错，语法和用词都比较准确。但是有一些小错误，比如第一句话中应该是“I am writing”而不是“I am wiring”，第二段中“promote the distance”应该是“promote the relationship”，第三段中“proper ways to better our English learning”应该是“proper ways to improve our English learning”。此外，作文的内容也比较充实，但是可以更具体一些，比如可以提到具体的问题或者方法。总体而言，这篇作文还有提高的空间，但是已经具备了较好的写作基础。