高中英语作文评分：邀请外教做访谈节目

评分：14分

评语：这篇作文整体语言流畅，表达清晰，符合要求。但是有一个小的语法错误，第二段中的‘the the’应该改为‘the’。此外，建议在第三段中对‘Talk and Talk’的主要内容进一步阐述，以展示其吸引力和价值。最后，对于邀请的时间和话题，作者表述得明确，但建议在邮件结尾处再次确认。

作文内容：I am Li Hua, in charge of 'Talk and Talk', an English program from the Campus Broadcasting Station, As your student as well, I will be very honored if you can accept my invitation to do am interview. 'Talk and Talk' is a face to face interview about some hot topics in and out of campus. Besides its practical content, ranging from history events to the latest foot-ball games, the interviewees, who are invited to attend this program, also contribute a lot to its high reputation, such as our principal, and our mayor as well. Broadcast every day, 'Talk and Talk' contains a large amount of information with a fast pace, because of which, news programs can contain much information in a short time. I’d like to interview something about your impression on this Winter Olympics in China and your advice on how to improve oral English. If it is convenient for you, the date is set at 7 p.m. next Monday. By the way,. we’ve prepared a secret gift for you and please call me at anytime if you have any question. Thank you in advance.