using linkers adverbs and appropriate idioms to make the sentence more fluent natural and colloquialYeah almost every time it rains it can really mess with transportation in my hometown The heavy down

Yeah, you know, almost every time it rains, it can really mess with transportation in my hometown. I mean, the heavy downpour can often lead to flooded roads, which in turn makes it dangerous to drive and causes major delays for buses. It's definitely a hassle for us commuters, you know.