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Nowadays, a large number of functional electronic products such as smartphones and computers have gradually entered ordinary people's homes. While they bring endless benefits to society, more and more people are also concerned about the disadvantages these products have caused. In my opinion, it is important to strike a balance between the advantages and disadvantages in order to achieve a healthy development for our society.