please highlight any errors of my writing and explain to me It is true that the fast development of technology has caused some damages to the environment People have difference views about whether th
There are a few errors in your writing. Here are the corrections:
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"People have difference views about whether these technological practices should be banned or continued." Correction: People have different views about whether these technological practices should be banned or continued. (Change "difference" to "different")
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"While a simple life may help reduce the impact of human activities, I believe that applying technological methods is a wiser way to address the environmental issue." Correction: While a simple life may help reduce the impact of human activities, I believe that applying technological methods is a wiser way to address environmental issues. (Remove "the" before "environmental issue" and add "s" to "issue" to make it plural)
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"There are certainly several reasons why living a simpler life is environmentally friendly." Correction: There are certainly several reasons why living a simpler life is environmentally friendly. (The sentence is correct, no errors)
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"Firstly, less use of private cars can largely reduce the emission of carbon dioxide and exhaust fumes, which are the two main gases that lead to green house effect." Correction: Firstly, less use of private cars can largely reduce the emission of carbon dioxide and exhaust fumes, which are the two main gases that lead to the greenhouse effect. (Change "green house effect" to "greenhouse effect" and add a space between "green" and "house")
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"If they choose to shop in the second-hand stores or purchase simple designs more often, resources will be recycled and reused for a better place." Correction: If they choose to shop in second-hand stores or purchase simple designs more often, resources will be recycled and reused for a better purpose. (Remove "the" before "second-hand stores" and change "place" to "purpose")
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"With the technical innovation, there has been more and more vehicles using renewable energy on the streets, allowing people to drive cars without polluting the air." Correction: With technical innovation, there have been more and more vehicles using renewable energy on the streets, allowing people to drive cars without polluting the air. (Remove "the" before "technical innovation" and change "has been" to "have been" to match the plural subject "vehicles")
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"Additionally, many traditional industries are in urgent need of technical supports for transition to new energy systems, since the government introduced low-carbon targets." Correction: Additionally, many traditional industries are in urgent need of technical support for transitioning to new energy systems since the government introduced low-carbon targets. (Change "supports" to "support" and remove the comma after "systems")
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"Furthermore, it is highly likely that individuals can get confused when it comes to how to separate garbage, and even sometimes they might just totally ignore this initiative." Correction: Furthermore, it is highly likely that individuals can get confused when it comes to how to separate garbage, and sometimes they might just totally ignore this initiative. (Remove "even" before "sometimes")
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"The good thing is the AI technology can provide proper guidance and separate the waste automatically for humans, making the process much easier." Correction: The good thing is AI technology can provide proper guidance and separate the waste automatically for humans, making the process much easier. (Remove "the" before "AI technology")
Overall, your writing is well-structured and coherent. Just make sure to check for minor grammar and punctuation mistakes
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