There are a few errors in your writing. Here are the corrected sentences:

  1. "There has been an increasing trend that more and more people are not familiar with their neighbours, which leads to a poor sense of community." Correction: There has been an increasing trend of people becoming unfamiliar with their neighbors, which leads to a poor sense of community.

  2. "With the rapid development of the Internet, people tend to spend time chatting and making friends using social media instead of meeting others in-person." Correction: With the rapid development of the internet, people tend to spend time chatting and making friends using social media instead of meeting others in person.

  3. "Secondly, it is not uncommon to see that a lot of people are moving all the time for various reasons such as marriage, new working places or studying in another city." Correction: Secondly, it is not uncommon to see many people moving all the time for various reasons such as marriage, new job opportunities, or studying in another city.

  4. "Finally, few community campaigns have been held and limited activity space has been constructed, providing a poor condition for encouraging social bonding." Correction: Finally, few community campaigns have been held and limited activity spaces have been constructed, providing poor conditions for encouraging social bonding.

  5. "Inactive community can certainly be lightened in several ways." Correction: An inactive community can certainly be revitalized in several ways.

  6. "I believe that the change must start with the managers of the community, who need to organise more engaging events, and encourage inhabitants to take part in, generating a vibrant atmosphere." Correction: I believe that the change must start with the managers of the community, who need to organize more engaging events and encourage inhabitants to take part, generating a vibrant atmosphere.

  7. "Also, the government should allocate part of the grants to the construction of entertaining areas for the community." Correction: Additionally, the government should allocate a portion of the grants to the construction of recreational areas for the community.

  8. "With the financial support from the authorities, the building projects would be guaranteed to proceed in a reliable way." Correction: With financial support from the authorities, the building projects would be guaranteed to proceed reliably.

  9. "At the same time, creating an online community on media platforms such as Wechat would be a good idea, where people would have access to the latest updates happening in the neighbourhood, share their opinions, and gradually get acquainted with each other." Correction: Additionally, creating an online community on media platforms such as WeChat would be a good idea, where people would have access to the latest updates happening in the neighborhood, share their opinions, and gradually get acquainted with one another.

  10. "In conclusion, neighbors would still be likely to be isolated until a joint effort of the government, community, and media are made to tackle this problem." Correction: In conclusion, neighbors are likely to remain isolated until a joint effort between the government, community, and media is made to tackle this problem

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