help me polish the following paragraph with academic styleComparison in AGE measure between the proposed method and the other state-of-the-art methods on intermittent motion category of SBMnet data

This study aims to compare the age measure of the proposed method with other state-of-the-art methods within the "intermittent motion" category of the SBMnet dataset. The optimal age scores for each video sequence are highlighted in black. This analysis seeks to provide a comprehensive evaluation of the effectiveness of the proposed method in comparison to existing approaches, thereby contributing to the advancement of age estimation techniques in the field.