help me polish the following sentences with academic styleIn the revised manuscript we compared the results of the proposed model with the DCP algorithm and BI-GAN algorithm executed on the intermitte

In the revised manuscript, we conducted a comparative analysis of the proposed model vis-à-vis the DCP algorithm and BI-GAN algorithm, using the intermittent video and SBIdataset datasets, respectively. The findings of our analysis indicate that our model outperforms the DCP algorithm by a margin of 15:1, and the BI-GAN algorithm by a margin of 28:2. Thus, while our algorithm may not be the most cutting-edge approach, it nevertheless offers a valuable and significant contribution to the academic research domain, by addressing the complex challenge of reconstructing intermittent video backgrounds