请翻译并修正润色据收货人介绍设备于近期刚刚投入使用设备主体及操纵部分被放置在筒仓仓顶工作部分被放置于筒仓内并与主体通过软连接相连其形似螺旋桨通过旋转将货物打散恢复流动性。检验时该设备正在12号筒仓作业。12号筒仓的人孔道门在那时尚无法打开货位高于人孔道门且码头考虑到安全不允许各方检验人前往筒仓舱顶检验。因此各方检验人未能见到设备工作。以下图片为收货人提供供参考。另据工人消息该设备清除率似乎不太理想

According to the consignee, the equipment was recently put into use. The main body and control part of the equipment are placed on the top of the silo, while the working part is placed inside the silo and connected to the main body through a flexible connection, which resembles a propeller and disperses and restores the fluidity of the goods by rotating. At the time of inspection, the equipment was operating in silo No.12. The manhole door of silo No.12 could not be opened at that time (the cargo was higher than the manhole door), and the dock did not allow inspection personnel to go to the top of the silo for safety reasons. Therefore, the inspection personnel were unable to see the equipment in operation. The attached pictures were provided by the consignee for reference. According to workers' reports, the clearance rate of the equipment seems to be less than ideal, and the progress of the operation is slow.

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1. 设备主体及操纵部分被放置在筒仓仓顶，工作部分被放置于筒仓内并与主体通过软连接相连，其形似螺旋桨，通过旋转将货物打散恢复流动性。- The main body and control part of the equipment are placed on the top of the silo, while the working part is placed inside the silo and connected to the main body through a flexible connection, which resembles a propeller and disperses and restores the fluidity of the goods by rotating.

设备主体及操纵部分应该是主体和控制部分的意思，建议改为：The equipment's main body and control unit are placed on top of the silo, while the working unit is placed inside the silo and connected to the main body through a flexible connection. The working unit resembles a propeller and disperses and restores the fluidity of the goods by rotating.

2. 检验时，该设备正在12号筒仓作业。- At the time of inspection, the equipment was operating in silo No.12.

建议改为：At the time of inspection, the equipment was in operation in silo No.12.

3. 该设备清除率似乎不太理想，作业进度较慢。- According to workers' reports, the clearance rate of the equipment seems to be less than ideal, and the progress of the operation is slow.

建议改为：According to workers' reports, the equipment's clearance rate appears to be subpar, resulting in slow progress of the operation