Grammar Correction: Parallel Structure in Sentences
The sentence 'We normally meet at a restaurant and having dinner together, having casual conversations and talk about the latest gossip, roast about things in life and work.' contains a grammatical error called faulty parallelism.
Faulty parallelism occurs when elements of a sentence that are grammatically similar are not presented in the same grammatical form.
Here's how to correct the sentence:
Original: We normally meet at a restaurant and having dinner together, having casual conversations and talk about the latest gossip, roast about things in life and work.
Corrected: We normally meet at a restaurant and have dinner together, have casual conversations and talk about the latest gossip, and roast things in life and work.
Explanation:
The sentence lists a series of activities the group does when they meet. To maintain parallel structure, each activity should be in the same grammatical form. In the corrected sentence, each activity is a verb phrase in the present tense: 'have dinner', 'have conversations', 'talk about', and 'roast things'.
By using parallel structure, your writing becomes clearer, more concise, and more impactful.
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