point mistakes by sentence The two bar graphs show the employment in freedonia by sex in 6 sectors Manufacuring Communications Finance Wholesale Public secotr and public sector defence in 1975 and 199
- "Manufacuring" is misspelled and should be "Manufacturing."
- "Public secotr" is misspelled and should be "Public sector."
- "in the graph the men number" should be "in the graph, the number of men."
- "less than 10%" should be "less than 10% difference."
- "most population" should be "the largest population."
- "at public sector" should be "in the public sector."
- "sex difference seems not changed" should be "the sex difference does not seem to have changed."
- "more women flood in" should be "more women entered."
- "fouth" is misspelled and should be "fourth."
- "women worker number also take lead" should be "the number of women workers also takes the lead.
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