1501098283：AndthisopportunitycanbetakentoeffectivelyimprovetheservicequalityandworkefficiencyoftheentireenterpriseThefactsshowthatonlybyimprovingthelevelofprocessmanagementcantheentirefinancialsharing

Yes, there is a grammar mistake. It should be "And this opportunity can be taken to effectively improve the service quality and work efficiency of the entire enterprise. The facts show that only by improving the level of process management can the entire financial sharing service model be effectively applied and implemented in the enterprise."