英文自我介绍语法错误修正：详细解析及优化建议

以下是英文自我介绍中存在的语法错误的修正：

'I’m Abby.' → 'My name is Abby.'
'Coincidentally, Ms Zhu, I live in Qidu too.' → 'Coincidentally, Ms. Zhu, I also live in Qidu.'
'I have a lively and enthusiastic personality.' - No grammar errors.
'I study in Wenzhou University and I like my desk in my dorm.' → 'I study at Wenzhou University, and I enjoy having my own desk in the dorm.'
'Currently, I’m practicing my English listening skills by listening BBC.' → 'Currently, I'm improving my English listening skills by listening to BBC.'
'To be honest, I don’t decide to major in what subject.' → 'To be honest, I haven't decided on a specific major yet.'
'My favorite class is psychology class because I can relax myself when having the class.' → 'My favorite class is psychology because it helps me relax and unwind.'
'I plan to take part in the entrance exams for postgraduate schools and enhance my ability of professional class.' → 'I plan to take part in the entrance exams for postgraduate schools to enhance my professional skills.'
'I am multi-talented and skilled in calligraphy, painting, and playing the guzheng.' - No grammar errors.
'I enjoy spending my weekends in the library reading books and I am also a photography enthusiast who enjoys capturing moments of life.' - No grammar errors.
'My mom is a engineer and she is a shopping expert who can spend the whole day without getting tired.' → 'My mom is an engineer and a shopping expert who can spend the whole day without getting tired.'
'My dad is a policeman working in wenzhoushigonganju and he is fond of fitness.' → 'My dad is a policeman working in the Wenzhou Public Security Bureau, and he is fond of fitness.'
'My mom is strict to me when it comes to studying.' → 'My mom is strict with me when it comes to studying.'
'My best friend is Xu Siyin, my roommate, a lovely girl addicting in paiqiushaonian.' → 'My best friend is Xu Siyin, my lovely roommate, who is addicted to badminton.'
'Besides, I get along well with my other roommate, a group of cute girls, and our dorm is full of love.' → 'Moreover, I get along well with my other roommates who are a group of lovely girls, and our dorm is filled with love.'

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