Can you fine tune this sentence Manage end-to-end key product quality program goal P1 level by identifying risky Seller to improve proactive detection model resulting in a 455 reduction of counterfei

As the manager of the end-to-end key product quality program goal (P1 level), I successfully identified and managed risky Sellers, thereby improving our proactive detection model. This led to a significant reduction of 45.5% in the counterfeit complaint rate for CN Sellers selling into the global marketplace.