Can you fine tune this sentence - With the CN local insights provided from SQ the issue of NOI abuse came to the attention of APAC TSE and commit to drive CDT-program owned cut of the NOI HVL FP reduc

With the insightful knowledge of CN provided by SQ, the issue of NOI abuse caught the attention of APAC TSE, leading to a commitment to spearhead the CDT-program-owned reduction of the NOI HVL FP goal by 2023.