Can you help me fine tune this sentence - 1 Based on the analysis we learned 34 of the defects were generated even after PQ gates which means PQ has to go back to those brands and enhance mechanism to

Based on our analysis, we discovered that 34% of defects occurred after PQ gates were implemented, indicating that PQ needs to revisit these brands and improve their mechanisms to protect them. This also implies that we may encounter further defect spikes in 2023, as PQ gates require ongoing adjustments. As a result, I am interested in exploring potential strategies to strengthen PQ gating mechanisms and prevent defects from occurring in gated brands. This would allow us to ensure that the gating criteria are correctly placed, reducing the workload for Risk Managers.