请帮我评价下列句子的英文表述是否优秀有没有更好的表述：Glycosylation involves in the essential cellular behaviors during breast cancer progression

The sentence is grammatically correct and conveys the intended meaning clearly. However, there are a few ways to improve the phrasing:

• "Glycosylation is involved in essential cellular behaviors during breast cancer progression."
• "Glycosylation plays a crucial role in cellular behaviors essential for breast cancer progression."
• "During breast cancer progression, glycosylation is essential for various cellular behaviors."