can you fine tune this sentence - As Im passionate in building customer relationship I transitioned in community management to create an engaged community for workplace solutions with We Work Current

As a dedicated advocate for cultivating strong customer relationships, I made the transition to community management with We Work, where I successfully built an engaged community focused on providing top-notch workplace solutions. Presently, I collaborate closely with global teams specializing in business, product, operations, legal, and PR to enhance the fairness of Amazon policies and improve the accuracy of tools and processes, ultimately elevating the overall seller experience.