科学写作优化：示例句子修改及其原因

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| 原句子 | 修改后的结果 | 修改原因 | | ---------------------------------------------------------- | ----------------------------------------------------- | ----------------------------------------------------------- | | To evaluate the stability of the Zn anode in aqueous electrolyte and DES-3 electrolyte, Zn-Zn symmetric cells were assembled for long-term constant current cycling | To assess the stability of the Zn anode in both aqueous and DES-3 electrolytes, Zn-Zn symmetric cells were fabricated and subjected to long-term constant current cycling | - 重新组织句子结构，使其更加清晰明了 | | Although a smaller current was considered to be a challenging condition, the zinc anode in the DES-3 electrolyte exhibited stable cycling for over 1700 hours under a current density of 0.1mA cm−2, while the cell using aqueous electrolyte experienced rapid increase in overpotential and failure after 52 hours | Despite the challenging condition of a lower current, the zinc anode in the DES-3 electrolyte demonstrated stable cycling for more than 1700 hours at a current density of 0.1mA cm−2, whereas the cell utilizing the aqueous electrolyte experienced a rapid increase in overpotential, leading to failure after 52 hours | - 简化句子结构
- 使用较简练的表达方式 | | When the working temperature reached 80℃, under a current density of 1 mA cm−2 and a deposition capacity of 1 mAh cm−2, the aqueous electrolyte showed a polarization voltage increase and battery failure in less than 1500 minutes, due to the intensified parasitic reactions within the battery at higher temperatures, particularly the hydrogen evolution reaction (HER), which caused battery swelling and device detachment, leading to a decline in battery performance | At a working temperature of 80℃, with a current density of 1 mA cm−2 and a deposition capacity of 1 mAh cm−2, the aqueous electrolyte exhibited an increase in polarization voltage and experienced battery failure in less than 1500 minutes. This was attributed to intensified parasitic reactions within the battery at higher temperatures, notably the hydrogen evolution reaction (HER), resulting in battery swelling, device detachment, and a decline in battery performance | - 重新组织句子结构，使其更加清晰明了 | | In contrast, the cell using DES-3 electrolyte demonstrated stable cycling for over 5000 minutes (Fig S) | In contrast, the cell employing the DES-3 electrolyte exhibited stable cycling for more than 5000 minutes (Fig S) | - 使用较简练的表达方式 |