How Technology Impacts Communication: A Balanced Perspective

Here are the highlighted mistakes:

1. 'in some extent' should be 'to some extent' for proper grammar.
2. 'videoing function' should be 'video function' or 'video capabilities'.
3. 'as a substitution of' should be 'as a substitute for' or 'as a replacement for'.
4. 'offline face-to-face interaction' could be rephrased as 'in-person face-to-face interaction'.
5. 'online communication provides a compromise way' should be 'online communication provides a compromised way' or 'online communication provides a convenient way'.
6. 'feelling overstressed' should be 'feeling overstressed'.
7. 'the fact that mobile phone and computers are taking more and more time in people's life is unstoppable' could be rephrased as 'the fact that mobile phones and computers are playing an increasingly significant role in people's lives is undeniable'.
8. 'realise the influence these technologies could bring can are not necessarily harmful' doesn't make sense grammatically. It could be rephrased as 'recognize that the influence these technologies can bring is not necessarily harmful'.
9. 'promote or complicate the communication between people' could be rephrased as 'facilitate or complicate interpersonal communication'.
10. 'depends on different needs and likes of their own' could be rephrased as 'depends on individual preferences and needs'.

Please note that while these are suggestions to improve the clarity and flow of your writing, there may be alternative ways to phrase certain sentences.