语法错误分析及修改:以 "The hero in my eyes is Mao Zedong." 为例
The hero in my eyes is Mao Zedong.\nMao Zedong is handsome, and he has a round face, deep-set eyes, and a mole on his face. He is well-built and has really black hair.\n\n修改方法:\n1. 在第二句中,应该在"handsome"之后加上逗号,以连接两个独立的句子。\n2. 在第三句中,应该将"the"改为"his",以表示"他的脸上有一个痣"。\n3. 在第四句中,应该将"he has"改为"has",以避免重复使用"he"。
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