Microstructural Analysis of Emulsions Using Scanning Electron Microscopy and Vacuum Drying

Microstructural Examination of Emulsions

The microstructure of the emulsion was examined using a COXEM scanning electron microscope. Subsequently, the sample solution was subjected to vacuum drying at a temperature of 50 °C.

| Original | Improved | Reason for Modification | |--------------------------------------------------------------------|-----------------------------------------------------------------|-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------| | The microstructure of the emulsion was scrutinized utilizing a COXEM scanning electron microscope, followed by subjecting the sample solution to vacuum drying at a temperature of 50 ﾰC. | The microstructure of the emulsion was examined using a COXEM scanning electron microscope. Subsequently, the sample solution was subjected to vacuum drying at a temperature of 50 °C. | 1. Improved Clarity and Readability: Splitting the sentence into two enhances clarity and readability. 2. Concise and Professional Phrasing: Replaced 'scrutinized utilizing' with 'examined using' for a more concise and professional tone. 3. Enhanced Flow and Comprehension: Separating the vacuum drying process into its own sentence improves the flow and comprehension of the methodology. |