IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay: Disposable Products and Their Impact on Society

Overall, your essay is well-written and presents a clear argument. However, there are a few grammar and sentence structure errors that can be improved:\

1. In the first paragraph, instead of saying "the costs of thrown-away items have been significantly declined nowadays," you can say "the costs of disposable items have significantly decreased in recent times."\
2. In the second paragraph, instead of saying "by aseptic nature of these items can individuals avoid the risks of exposing under certain transmissible diseases like flu," you can say "the sterile nature of these items allows individuals to avoid the risk of exposure to certain transmissible diseases such as the flu."\
3. In the same paragraph, instead of saying "Moreover, the decreasing prices of throwaway items and the enhancing of economic level in recent society leads to a booming consumption of disposable products," you can say "Furthermore, the decreasing prices of disposable items and the improving economic conditions in society have led to a significant increase in the consumption of such products."\
4. In the third paragraph, instead of saying "Therefore, more forestland is being used for waste burial, leading to deforestation," you can say "As a result, more forestland is being used for waste burial, contributing to deforestation."\
5. In the same paragraph, instead of saying "Furthermore, as a part of thrown-away products are made by plastic," you can say "Moreover, as a significant portion of disposable products are made of plastic."\
6. In the last paragraph, instead of saying "This social situation gives rise to two major problems: threats to personal health and a deteriorating environment," you can say "This social situation gives rise to two major problems: threats to personal health and environmental degradation."
   Overall, your essay is well-structured and presents a clear argument. With these minor improvements in grammar and sentence structure, your essay will be even stronger. Good luck!